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    That's the song we're having sung at the wedding. It's our song.
    Good catch!
    Dreams really do come true!

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    May God bless you:
    daughters and sons,
    fathers and mothers,
    lawyers and miners,
    the wealthy and the poor;

    and you,
    who quiets my wheeling doubts,
    who holds only me in your eyes,
    my best friend.

    Against all odds I found you,
    a jewel among the ashes,
    awaiting a soft touch to shine.

    You are my lift and laughter,
    a slow sundance,
    love’s lark.

    May we always be to each other
    what we are today,
    so that when that dark midnight chimes,
    we find that we have circled back
    to this first day with God,
    and walk again hand in hand into the warmth of His light
    with the peace of doves.

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    Thank you Spidey! That is beautiful. Made me cry.
    I can't wait to read MPowers' as well. You guys just needed a jump
    start. Thanks so much! Peg
    Dreams really do come true!

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    Peg, this has been very difficult not knowing you or your fiance personally. I may come back in a day or two and give it a tweek here and there.

    Make believe dreams and fairytales
    They lived their lives alone
    Sir Laneclot will whisk her far away
    His Princess will make his life complete

    But reality steps in...
    Princesses and Knights in shining armor exist no more

    Then, by God's plan
    an answer to their prayers
    Someone to make them happy
    To make this hectic world more bearable to live in

    Soon, they're everything they exist for
    They're hearts, minds and souls are entwined around each other
    They have now become one
    Two best friends making each other's life complete

    They make a new begining together
    Flying through life together like white doves
    forming a circle of love that can never be broken

    She got her Prince
    He got his Princess
    They followed God's plan
    and He made their fairytale come true

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    Dreamer, just noticed your post. Thanks. That's beautiful as well.
    Dreams really do come true!

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    I've posted a draft of a poem in the Critique Me thread. Comments are welcome.

    Thanks,


    - MP

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    WOW...dyslexia sucks! That should be Sir Lancelot, not Sir Laneclot!! Sorry, Benz.

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    Mpowers, read the poem. This is also beautiful. I like the fact
    that you created a farytale that tied in with the doves. I know this
    was a difficult task, but as I predicted you guys have done a wonderful
    job. I will wait until this Friday and make my "final" decision and award the winner the 2,000 twollars. Thanks to everyone for donating your valuable time. benz
    Dreams really do come true!

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    Ok...I didn't realize when I requested this task that the burden of choosing between others would be so difficult. Its not a fun position to be in. I know everyone worked hard to understand me and what I wanted.

    I liked parts of each one of them, especially Mpower's fairytale within,
    which had to take some time and imagination, and Dreamer's reflections of a knight and his lady. I feel Spiderman captured soul and spirit of our special intimate relationship for the most part.

    I think it could be something anyone with a romantic heart could say, "Yea, that's us! That's how we feel about each other," especially since it will be read to an audiance.

    Thanks again to everyone for your efforts. I know this was as difficult to complete as it was for me to choose. I love you all for responding!
    Congratulations to Spiderman...2000 points coming at ya!

    Spiderman, if you don't care to share the info, please pm me with the name you want me to use to give credit on my wedding program.

    Thanks again!

    Peg
    Dreams really do come true!

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    that prolly will be Carol "no Face"
    LMAO
    sorry
    i had to!!


    YAY!!
    great choice Peg...very difficult....

    mimi



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