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    Default P 100 indentation of "POOK" 's

    Did anyone else notice that paragraphs 1 and 3, both starting with the word "Pook", are indented incorrectly??
    They are both indented 2 spaces too far.
    This really struck me as odd, both indented 2 spaces too far, and both being the same word.
    Noticed it while I was working on the mushroom dots....for the 50th time...
    Ideas anyone?

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    I believe you are correct.

    Also, on page 18, the fourth line should be indented and is not.
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    Default Re: P 100 indentation of "POOK" 's

    Quote Originally Posted by jenrn4u
    Did anyone else notice that paragraphs 1 and 3, both starting with the word "Pook", are indented incorrectly??
    They are both indented 2 spaces too far.
    This really struck me as odd, both indented 2 spaces too far, and both being the same word.
    Noticed it while I was working on the mushroom dots....for the 50th time...
    Ideas anyone?
    The first "Pook!" on page 100 is a one word paragraph?????
    Who is speaking here? Yorah was the last to speak on pg 99.

    Paragraph 3:
    Pook, too, revived by the miraculous rain had flown all night---in the dark---to be back with Zac and Ana.
    My question here, again, is that we assume this is Pook?

    from page (99)
    And soon they heard more --- panting and flapping of wings. And then a thump.
    Ana and Zac both wondered what could be thumping? Something clumsy tumbled down through Yorah's leaves. Then, as if catapulted from a limb, a furry white ball with wings shot through the window.

    Then back to page (100)
    "Pook!"
    The happy and very much alive little doth made a hard, three-bounce landing on the bed.
    The only token I found was SQUAT!!!
    http://www.tweleve.org/upload/squat_token.jpg

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