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    Default A riddle haiku from KhayPrower! Yay!

    Lol. Going through old writings of mine, I came across this. It is a riddle I wrote forever ago in Haiku form. Please post your guesses here, in spoilers. The first one to post the correct answer, I will give 25 twollars. A small amount, for a small riddle!!!!

    Lol.


    Jewels strewn about
    Black velvet jeweler's cloth
    Spread high out of reach


    Err... hehe. Looks harder, now that I take a second look. Can I get some input here? Maybe I need to up the amount of the prize.

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    Me

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    I would bet that's it and its brilliant - both hiaku and answer!

    almost sorry I took Zoe to the drive-in and missed getting here first!
    but we did enjoy!
    em - luanne

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    Yes, he was correct. I already gave him his prize! Lol. Do you really like it? I wrote it for a poetry class a couple years ago. And NO ONE got it - I only made a D on the assignment (I was just supposed to write a haiku. That was the whole assignment.) I was afraid A) It was crap, and B) it was too obscure. But it took Liz all of 7 minutes! Hehe...

    Seriously, I do appreciate the feedback. It makes me feel like a bit less of a failure/loser. Lol.


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    Ok, the time right now is apparently MATHLESS O'CLOCK! Lol. My bad - 11 minutes. SUCH a difference!


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    don't think the teach was being fair!!!
    I like it ! and it's late -
    I'm not good at math even in the daytime - much less late into the night!
    you should post some more of your poetry here - there is a thread and some brilliant poets here - I even posted one once - I am not too brave - lol
    going to take another stab at it one of these days - waiting for the mood to strike!
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    Khay, make your way to the Creative Corner, words section. We are currently posting poems on the Ecumenical Thought House thread. There's also a multiple-page Haiku thread. We'd love to have you join us there.

    You too, BGBob. You don't have to be brave to post there. We're a very forgiving group.

    Carol

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