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    Summer.
    Beetle's tired.
    Spring flowers and colors gone,
    Rainbow blocks still here.

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    "Regard this simple silver salt cellar. Regard this simple hat."

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    Good work. It makes it sound like the beetle is sad that he's the last to be found!

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    atop a heap of garbage
    pity slept alone
    lost in multilayed clothing

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    Gol-durn stupid book!
    Wish I had saved my money!
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    Sorry....I don't really feel this way, but I couldn't resist the easy haiku.
    What is the sound of one hand clapping?

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