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    Er, I wrote this for English class...it's a Sonnet, Shakespearean styled....yes, I know I forgot the last two lines (for those who are familiar w/ this style)

    The Rain

    Sitting here in thoughts of the days before the rain,
    Remembering how things used to be,
    I look for the source of all this pain,
    But it always seems to fall back to me.

    Feeling the icy rain running down my face,
    As if seeing my sins against you cascade down in each drop of rain,
    Atone for each one I must before I leave this place,
    Nothing left to lose, so much left to gain.

    Curled up in the place you once had slept,
    To me, it almost feels like you are there,
    I reached out my hands in hopes you hadn’t left,
    But found the place my hand came to rest….was bare.


    nyeh, not my best work, but whatever....

    I'm not in denial, I'm just rather selective about the reality I accept.

    ~And the poets are just kids who didn't make it
    And never had it at all (Fall Out Boy)

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    Quite nice, Lady. I hope your aria went well this week!

    Carol

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    Oh my LI, that is very nice.
    Thank you for sharing.

    MiMi

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